New Adoptable! What do you guys think?

[howlingdarkness]

Hi everyone I'm howling (just call me Acadia, thats my real name) and I just wanted to say hi and ask for your guys oppinion on something I made. I have a few in process now but here is the first one.



this is a new one I drew on paper, I like this one better. I am gonna get my scanner working and I am gonna make more of the lolfs like this one... does it look more wolf-ish? I still want the longer legs though since that is a charactersitic of the lolf.

Do you think it should be an adoptable? I know I'm not very good at this yet but how is it? She is like a type of wolf. I think I'm gonna call in a Lolf. ;D

Have any suggestions?

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Thanks!

[howlingdarkness]

anyone? I'd really like your opinions.

[sera]

Her body shape makes me think of a horse. . . so she almost looks like a fuzzy, wolf/horse cross. xD;;;

Her outline is a bit of a turn off to me, since the sketchiness seems rather messy. She is still very cute, though. ^^ That said, i'm not into many new adoptables, just the ones i've been collecting. ^^;;

[Dawby]

I like her feet!!

[howlingdarkness]

thanks guys! I'm gonna work on the outlining because I'm using a laptop. Geesh is it hard to draw on that touch board thing. XD. So I'll look for a mouse and fix the shading and outlining up a little. =)

[Rozel]

It looks good, but looks horse-ish and scribbly O:

[DragonSpyrit]

I like the wolf/horse combo look a lot actually =) As others said the lines could use some cleaning, but I think you're off to a good start.

[Janalee]

Hi Acadia! I have to say, the first outline is pretty impressive when you consider you did it with the touch board of a laptop. ^^ I agree with you though, the hand drawn outline looks better to me; the proportions seem more consistent in that one. It'll be nice to see how it looks once you've cleaned it up, but for now, I have to agree with DS; looks like a decent start. *smiles*