werewolf fighting a wolf drawing

[zelda324]

please tell me what you all think ^^ ;D


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[Broan]

I really like it, and would love to see it greyscaled, or coloured. I like the spiky ruffles in the fur. Perhaps more of thoose in the tail? *hug*

[Dawby]

This might sound weird, but you draw really good snouts. And toes!! Fantastic clawed toes!!
*is jealous*

[SyrSyr]

Really good legs and paws/feet on the werewolf. Nice expressions on the two wolves as well-I have a hard time with wolf expressions. I really like the werewolf's right front paw. Good job with the werewolf ears too, I like how alert the werewolf looks with them pricked forward.

However, the werewolf's left hand and arm (her left) seem a bit wrong to me. I think the arm is too long and the paw too big. I can't pinpoint exactly what's wrong but it just doesn't look right to me either anatomically or considering perspective.

The fore legs of the springing wolf aren't quite right for a wolf. You've drawn them more like human arms...unless that's what you're going for. But I suggest looking at some wolf pictures.

I feel kind of mean or assuming now since I'm no good at wolves. But that's just some advice. You don't have to agree with me. All in all a commendable picture and one I quite like. ^_^

[zelda324]

its ok SyrSyr because the wolf i couldnt get the legs right on it and the were wolfs arm that is swinging backwards ready to strike the wolf i dont know seems kindof right to me compared to how i drew it and really the werewolf is suppose to look like its turning to the side so i think thats kindof how its suppose to look^^but the wolf i dont know lol^^

[Cel Theory]

I really like it too, I wish I was that good at claws and everything. ^^; The far thigh on the werewolf looks a little thick, it might just be in comparison to the other, but that stuck out a bit. Also, I think the position of the werewolf's tail is a bit odd... it looks almost squirrelish in that position... I'd imagine it being striaghter, unless it's a curly chow tail. ^.~ It's really good overall! I think the fur is amazing! Great job!

[Belladandy]

I think my bunny slippers just ran for cover!
(that's a comploment for yah)
Golly wish I can draw paw-paws like that!

[zelda324]

well i colored the head of the werewolf with took forever because i did it on paints so i only did the head i hope you like it^^

[Sarnah]

As others have said, your claws are really nice. Also, I love everything about the werewolf's left leg. However.

The other leg is positioned completely out of whack. Try standing like that. Bending your left leg and leaning forward is easy. It's not hard to imagine lunging forward like that.

Now, as for the right leg, the only way it would be facing the viewer is if the werewolf had been. So, you go back to standing regular, then turn slightly and "lunge" until your left foot is back in the springing position that you had it in before.

Notice where your right leg is. It should be mostly straight, tilted slightly, and with very little weight on it. Your heel probably isn't even touching the ground.

Now try to replicate the pose you have your werewolf in. Leave your left leg bent, turn you right leg so that it's at a ninety degree angle, and drag it back underneath you until it's bent so that your right knee is lower than your left knee. This is a difficult position to stay in just standing up; you're half-squatting with your heels turned at an awkward angle, putting most of the weight in your right calf--good for balancing only, not lunging forward. If anything, I'd say this is a position you might wind up in if you started falling backwards and you stuck your right foot back to save yourself. You want the weight to be in the forward leg, since that's where his momentum is going.

I recommend tilting it in slightly and making it so that the weight is solely in the left leg, which will, as mentioned earlier, have the left leg straightened and back a bit since he's jumped from his original position.

I'm not sure that was any help at all, but you seem to have talent with the legs/claws and I'd like to see it in a more realistic position. ;) You've also got some alignment problems with his shoulders, and the right arm could use some work. I recommend looking at an anatomy book or finding some sexxay guy who's flashing his arm. ;) Overall, I like him. <3

As for the wolf, looks good, though his forelegs could be shortened. I really like the big wolf eye you drew above him.#nosmileys