Jippers I worte something!

[Belladandy]

I've been working on this poem (but it's more like a song) for a few months till I think it's finnaly finished
I call it "Moonsong" since I can't think of any other tittle.

Moonsong

Of the night
the moon arise
giving me the light
to the one
she loves....

Adore...dream...wonder...

Like a veil unfolding
the night flows
One star Shining

I see her.....

Wind whisper her name to me
the one the moon loves...

She comes to me. Adore!
like a falling star. Dream!
like a loving song. Wonder!


Any comps or crits? Any suggestions I'm open for any ideas.

[Skye the Wolf]

That's awesome!

[Belladandy]

*turns redder then a holly berry*

Thanks! ;D

[Stormelle]

*huggles* I love it!

[Indigo]

Ooo, beautiful. ^__^