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Poetry
Mar 16, 2006 23:57:29 GMT -5
Post by Stormelle on Mar 16, 2006 23:57:29 GMT -5
-_- I'm bored out of my mind and just about to head to bed...ish. Anyways wrote a poem yesterday when I was kinda down ( feelin' better now though! ^^ ) and thought I'd share.
The Last Snow By Michelle Loveless aka Stormelle When the last snow has fallen I wake to wonder what the new day may take. When my hearts’ been broken and my eyes won’t open The snow is bitter but beautiful as it melts to spring. Spring, the season in which my smile breaks Will I be found or will I be lost. Only the dawn will tell
C&C welcome
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Poetry
Mar 18, 2006 10:43:25 GMT -5
Post by Belladandy on Mar 18, 2006 10:43:25 GMT -5
Not bad I think! Tinker with it some more though..
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Poetry
Mar 19, 2006 1:56:28 GMT -5
Post by alphabloodscythe on Mar 19, 2006 1:56:28 GMT -5
The snow is bitter...
I like the sound of that. Nice!
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