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Post by ~Kryos~ on Dec 11, 2005 17:24:28 GMT -5
Okay...you guys have inspired Kryos to pick up a pencil for the first time in over a year, after having completely given up on having any drawing ability what-so-ever...so please keep in mind the fact that I'm horribly out of practice...I just scanned this, so I haven't had time to clean it up yet...please let me know what you think! www.geocities.com/mists_of_the_metaphysical/bird.gif ------- I drew this last night, but my scanner was being tempermental,so I just got it scanned now: www.geocities.com/mists_of_the_metaphysical/bird2.gifOnce again, I still have rather a lot of cleaning to do...but I did try to improve the wings on this one (Thank-you to Dee of www.dreslough.com/ and her awesome tutorial on wing anatomy!!!) I still have a long way to go though... |
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Post by sera on Dec 11, 2005 18:00:40 GMT -5
no time for a 'real' critique from me, but i do love the tail and the little anou. . . fluff things around its neck. x3
would it actually be that big? oo; hehe
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Post by Selena on Dec 11, 2005 18:04:06 GMT -5
i like how you drew the head and tail, very cute ^^ the wing looks pretty good too
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Post by MadMooCow on Dec 11, 2005 21:49:54 GMT -5
Are you serious in not having drawn in over a year?? I think thats pretty darn good. Umm... yeah just study bird anatomy and wings just to get the feel of the way they bend and the layering of feathers and stuff... Nice work  |
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Post by ferabird on Dec 11, 2005 22:03:27 GMT -5
*wants*
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Post by Broan on Dec 12, 2005 0:16:35 GMT -5
I think it has real serious potential. I would love to see how it would be coloured in.
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Post by Sith Lord FP on Dec 12, 2005 1:16:20 GMT -5
thats really cool...id totally adopt
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Post by ~Kryos~ on Dec 12, 2005 1:29:58 GMT -5
Thanks you guys! ?<3 Now that I know that people would be interested in something like this, I'll try to develop it further...(I'm not all that happy with the way the wings look right now...>.<)
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Post by ~Kryos~ on Dec 14, 2005 0:07:05 GMT -5
Latest outline posted!!! ^^
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Post by Stormelle on Dec 14, 2005 0:10:17 GMT -5
I really like the second one a lot. I'd deffently get one. ^-^
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Post by sera on Dec 14, 2005 9:17:47 GMT -5
ii desu ne. . . ^^ still love the tail. . . HEHE wings are definitely better! ^^ i suggest practice, practice, practice!!!! lollol very cute feetsy!
anou. . . i think it's left wing might be in the wrong place. hrms. . i would study pictures of birds if i were you. ^^ especially if you're planning to do a bird adoprtion. ne?
anou. . . ah! ^^ i, also, would like to see a coloured version, but these are something i would be interested in pursuing in an adoption arena. hehe ^^
oh! and size. how big would the final product be? i'd be super iffy about adopting a bird this huge. . . lollol more than iffy. . . ^~ so i'd like to see how big you'd likely make them as well as a coloured example. ^^
i think that's it and i'm tired. ^^
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Post by dawboriffic on Dec 14, 2005 15:12:14 GMT -5
ooo, yah. i like. the tail needs a riot of shiny, sparkling colors when you color it in
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Post by Heather on Dec 23, 2005 14:32:50 GMT -5
Oooo! I like it! I'd adopt one like the second one!! hehe Oh yeah, and just keep practicing! You've already improved a lot just between the two drawings, I think! n_n |
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