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Post by Stormelle on Oct 11, 2008 22:47:45 GMT -5
 Pega's given me permission to draw C'bana and I've only drawn one so far, she nameless, but I wanted to show her off because I really enjoyed drawing her...What do you guys think? Anything to help me improve is fine, but please be nice. (I don't expect anyone to be rude, just thought I'd add that.) |
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Post by SunBlind on Oct 12, 2008 10:21:55 GMT -5
I likes muchly!
If you want comments, I'd say the front end is a bit skinny and the back end a bit big, but that's jut nitpicking *g* She doesn't look deformed or anything like that. The head is amazing :-D Love the expressive face.
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Post by Dawby on Oct 12, 2008 23:19:53 GMT -5
I agree! Stormie, your drawing skills just keep improving and improving. It's amazing. And the face is wonderful. You captured all the personality that Pega always manages to put into her crits; clearly she made the right choice in having you come aboard the family business, so to speak.  Yes the proportions are a bit off on the raised hind leg (and check your guide lines from the chest to the belly) but for me, the important part is how clear and nicely done the outline and colors are, and how appealing the face is. You must be proud! |
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Post by Janalee on Oct 13, 2008 0:21:43 GMT -5
I have to agree with everyone else; her face is really well done, and I like the tasselly pigtails in her mane too. ^^ I feel like the forefeet could be moved back a little bit, or be more muscular at the top, but I'm personally really horrible with proportions so I'd take any suggestions from me with a grain of salt... *crooked grin* All in all, very nice.
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Post by Stormelle on Oct 22, 2008 22:29:18 GMT -5
*belated answer* Wow. ^^ Thanks everyone. I am happy with her but there where deffinetly things that seemed off so I'll try to work on those with my next one.  Janalee: And because I'm happy with her piggy tails...Thankyou! They make me filled with joy...x3 |
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