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Post by Partner in Mischief on Mar 7, 2005 20:52:24 GMT -5
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Post by Partner in Mischief on Mar 7, 2005 21:31:50 GMT -5
*pokes*
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Post by Aylura on Mar 7, 2005 21:35:45 GMT -5
*must. stop. distracting. herself.* OK, here goes nothing- First thing I noticed is that she has no chin, and her jaw line is al little undefined. I believe you're using the hair to cover up the rest of her face/head/chest, since those parts are rather hard to draw. (I agree, which is why I don't draw humans.) From what I can tell, though, I think her neck is a little too long. (Which I might be wrong, though) The hair looks rather nice, but I'm curious as to what's holding it back? A loose tie at some sort near the base of the head (Where the hair changes direction) might help that. Ah... Wings. I <3 Wings, but they're a pain to draw. You may do well to look at some wing diagrams. ( 1 2) Her hands and feet are too small. Hands should be approximately the size of the face, although a little bit smaller. Feet are the same length as the forearm. Her legs are good, but it looks like she's standing... sorta. Maybe add some bend in the straight leg, or in her spine even. People curve in very interesting ways, especially if they're not on the ground. She looks very stiff. The flower is nice, but again, a refrence might be useful. The stem looks a little too thick and unmarked. Stems have detail too, even if it's just a couple of odd patches of color or a few kinks here and there. >.> <.< *sneaks away* |
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Post by Partner in Mischief on Mar 7, 2005 21:46:46 GMT -5
Thanks a lot!  And uhhh... she's supposed to be standing. XD |
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Post by Aylura on Mar 7, 2005 21:50:55 GMT -5
*sheepish* Aie, sorry 'bout that. I wasn't sure if she was standing or flying. I assumed flying, since she looks off balance. In that case, maybe add a little more weight to the one foot on the ground, and perhaps make a difference between the foot in the air (which holds no weight) and the foot on the ground (which is the only thing supporting her). At the moment, they look like carbon copies of each other. And I still think it'd be nice if she weren't so stiff, but that's a personal preference.  G'luck! |
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Post by Partner in Mischief on Mar 8, 2005 18:35:55 GMT -5
*pokebump*
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And uhhh... she's supposed to be standing. XD