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Post by Stormelle on Sept 10, 2004 23:33:16 GMT -5
In choiur we're singing this and I really find it means something to me. I'm thinking of puting it into my story. Well just look at the link, read the song, and if you want sing it. It toches my heart mabe not yours but it dose my own. www.thecolefamily.com/onetinsoldier.htm"Peace on Earth" was all it said. |
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Post by Stormelle on Sept 11, 2004 0:03:48 GMT -5
Well here is the frist chapter of my story give me opinuions. Oho and if you want to know what they are saying then I'll tell you. Well it didn't show at frist but here it is!
Chapter I
The Song
"Listen children to a story that was written long ago
'bout a kingdom on a mountain and the valley folk below," a soft moldy rang thought the air as a women with long silver hair greeted the little ones around her. She then continued her song or tail as some called them,"On the mountain was a treasure buried deep beneath a stone,and the valley people swore they'd have it for their very own." the women's beep sapphire eyes showed grief for she sang of her ancestors The Horrid Gai. Although the song was a treasure it had a lesson for the children, but she had yet to sing that part so she sang on,"Go ahead and hate your neighbor, go ahead and cheat a friend. Do it in the name of heaven, justify it in the end. There won't be any trumpets blowin' come the judgment day on the bloody morning after one tin soldier rides away." the women stoped as a man with slik tan hair came towered her. She broke off from the song and in another language muttered,"Gia te onith?"
The man shook his head and grabbed her hand and pointed it at a large hill,"Ton gee mon!" He said picking up a small girl with tan hair like himself."Faraena" he whispered and leaned his head on her's. The women on the other hand gasped and piked up the small child that had been looking up at them.
"Stormelleia..." the women passed and then said,"Theth teon?" The man shook his head and they ran off. The mother of the small children whispering to them the rest of the song. "So the people of the valley sent a message up the hill asking for the buried treasure, tons of gold for which they'd kill. Came an answer from the kingdom: "With our brothers we will share all the secrets of our mountain, all the riches buried there. Go ahead and hate your neighbor, go ahead and cheat a friend. Do it in the name of heaven, justify it in the end. There won't be any trumpets blowin' come the judgment day on the bloody morning after one tin soldier rides away. Now the valley cried with anger; mount your horses, draw your sword, and they killed the mountain people, so they won their just reward. Now they stood beside the treasure on the mountain, dark and red,turned the stone and looked beneath it. "Peace on earth" was all it said. Go ahead and hate your neighbor, go ahead and cheat a friend. Do it in the name of heaven, justify it in the end. There won't be any trumpets blowin' come the judgment day on the bloody morning after one tin soldier rides away."
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