Lyza
Orchard Griffon
What would a mage wish for...? I know! CHOCOLATE!
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Post by Lyza on Oct 10, 2005 16:19:42 GMT -5
Well, my Doojas weren't too popular *sighs* any suggestions for improvement? Or are they just no good? I know the coloring isn't all that great, so any advies for that?
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Post by Leafy on Oct 10, 2005 18:32:46 GMT -5
Um, to be honest, they're really kinda scary n_n;; Less feet, more floof, like a floppy eared Peekinese would be cute, but teh hooves and the arms and the eyes are kinda scary n_n;
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Post by Dawby on Oct 10, 2005 19:57:14 GMT -5
yah, leafy's right. in a way they kinda remind me of those mutated kid show creatures from Spy Kids in that they're sort of humanish in a creepy way - the way you drew the mouth makes it seem like they have old man mustaches. it's not the coloring or the drawing - you clearly know how to do both.
edit: oh, the arms add to the humanish effect.
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Post by sera on Oct 10, 2005 20:51:49 GMT -5
for wot it's worth, along with leaf-chan's stuff, with their current basic shape and all that, it seems they should be smaller. some adoptiosn do well big (( and some of us are just lam0rz about shrinking more. . hehe )), but usually that's for adoptions that could/do carry riders or wotever. this really seems like it should be more of a petpet and not a ridepet. . . if that makes sense at all. @.@
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axis
Orchard Phoenix
Teh Panther r0xx0rs. ^^;
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Post by axis on Oct 11, 2005 17:46:22 GMT -5
Yeah... They have potential, but currently they're... *feels like a jerk* kinda creepy... Like the smile is all, "Heh heh uhuhu... Buy me... So I can eat you!"
More animal-like, more fluff, and shorter legs... to make the eyes slightly more animal-like and more cute, try maybe dropping the irises... Think, "Chibi!"
I like the big ears thing, though...
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Lyza
Orchard Griffon
What would a mage wish for...? I know! CHOCOLATE!
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Post by Lyza on Oct 12, 2005 20:18:15 GMT -5
thanks for the feedback. I guess I hadn't looked at them like that, but I see what you mean. O.O Back to the drawing board...
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